Poetry

[floetic_iris]

flowering, poetic from the floetic.

Come on speak your mind and speak your soul,
to find you whole.

Just let your poems flow.

And please fill this thread. :D

[Chukwuka]

Floetic poems from one who flowers...
Like life is, fragrance so sweet yet poison to me...
Round and round the wheels go constantly
As I sit in permanent contemplation of the blessed sights I've seen
Have many to go, but I really don't know...
Tell me, seems like you have great gifts for words or maybe I'm just hopeful
Floetic Poetic words can heal my dilemma...
Or empty sounds will vibrate my frustrated soul!!

[Louis85]

And we welcome another artist to the site,
It's easy to do 'cause it feels so right,
Welcome to our forum where we're all so tight (most times),
Creative thinking is always welcome...


Louis

[Chief]

hehehe...why does this remind me of the Louis/Justafan fiasco...:)

welcome welcome floetic

[Chukwuka]

Damn ya'll fuhq'n up da flizzo

[Cozmo D]

hehehe...why does this remind me of the Louis/Justafan fiasco...:)

welcome welcome floetic
Heheheh...you noticed it too? Why do you think I haven't posted in this thread, heheheh...err...whoops! :p

[Chukwuka]

Heheheh...you noticed it too? Why do you think I haven't posted in this thread, heheheh...err...whoops! :p

Was I around? I hate it when ya'll refer to things I don't know about!!! I think I recall... Not sure... I thought I was an O.G. here!!

[Cozmo D]

Nah, you weren't here yet. In fact, you came in just as we were recovering from it.

[Chukwuka]

Speaking of... Where is Justa? Is it in the archive folder.. I'd love to educate myself on the history of the drama... Before Chuk!!

I guess flizzo'n has gone out da window!!

HE-MAN!!

[Chief]

Here ya go chuck....

http://www.pmdawnonline.com/forum/showthread.php?t=2701

[Louis85]

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[Chief]

*smiles just a bit* "You had me at hello" :)

[Chukwuka]

That was great... You guys ROCK!!! I mean very cool...

[humanity_Sin_egma]

That was great... You guys ROCK!!! I mean very cool...
Here here; that was a fun read.

[Wheeljak]

Alright, I'ma try to write something:

I'm feeling really small standing in the proximity
Of all these minds that can write verse of such sublimity
People who, with paper anvil and quill hammer, can forge
Everyday words into keen-edged, beautiful swords
That can lay my heart open, and as it's cloven in two
I feel envious pain, but also a strange new
Desire to create, to expand my frontiers,
I want to write pretty too, and stand up with my peers.
But as this novice poetry probably shows,
I'm best off thus far keeping my words in prose.
But I'll evolve and develop although I'm now small,
And one day, I might just hold a candle to y'all.

[Louis85]

sounds like you're there to me, bro... nicely done.

[Chukwuka]

Alright, I'ma try to write something:

I'm feeling really small standing in the proximity
Of all these minds that can write verse of such sublimity
People who, with paper anvil and quill hammer, can forge
Everyday words into keen-edged, beautiful swords
That can lay my heart open, and as it's cloven in two
I feel envious pain, but also a strange new
Desire to create, to expand my frontiers,
I want to write pretty too, and stand up with my peers.
But as this novice poetry probably shows,
I'm best off thus far keeping my words in prose.
But I'll evolve and develop although I'm now small,
And one day, I might just hold a candle to y'all.

Yeah, I second...
Love the verbage...

[Wheeljak]

Thanks for the encouraging words, y'all!
It's my first poem! Well, technically it's not, but it is the first I've ever written because I wanted to, rather than because I had to if I didn't wanna get an F.:o

[Chief]

I dont know about y'all...but that sucked donkey balls...

[Wheeljak]

I dont know about y'all...but that sucked donkey balls...
Chief, I think that's the nicest think you've ever said to me! <snif>

[Chief]

oops..forgot to add the smiley...my bad..:)